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Freda avatarFreda · 2010-08-01

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當我正在玩電腦時，接到Peter的電話，他說他需要一些幫忙來舉辦明天的生日派對，我答應了他。我收拾了一些雜物，關掉電腦。正當我準備出門時，才發現雨下很大，我只能等雨小一點再出發。WhenIwasplayingcomputergames,Ireceivedaphonecallfrommyclassmate,Peter.Hesaidthatheneededsomehelpwiththrowingabirthdaypartythenextday,soIpromise
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Zora avatarZora2010-08-03
HELLO,WhenIwasplayingcomputergame,....(你不會同時玩兩個以上的遊戲)Hesaidthatheneededsomehelpforplanning....(throwing怪怪的)soIacceptedhim(promise就怪怪==)Icouldonlystarttilltheraingetssmaller.(這句我想了很久...這樣應該可以)Suddenly,therainstopped,IboughtmaterialswhileheadingforPeter'shouse.Becauseofourefforts,Ihopethatthepartycanbeaccomplishedsuccessfully....Sho
Dorothy avatarDorothy2010-08-01
上一段是沒有錯吧?但如果要改"soIpromisedhim."可改為"...,soIpromisedtohelp."這樣就有說到答應了他什麼,確實會比較清楚因為題目規定要"答應他"
Kama avatarKama2010-08-03
Afterawhile,therainstopped.Then,IgoovertobuysomestuffforthepartywhenIwasonthewaytoPeter'shouse.Afterourwarkinghard,theexpectativepartyhasfinallymadeupwithoutproblem.expectative可能要換成別的形容詞,但我想不出來,所以這可能要麻煩你自己來了希望可以幫到你喔~...Showmore
Joseph avatarJoseph2010-08-05
Therainstoppedsoon.IboughtsomefoodanddrinksthenwenttoPeter'shome.Throughthehardwork,IwishIcouldhaveafunparty.
Mia avatarMia2010-08-02
Soon,therain,IstartingtoPeterathome,onthewayShunbianMaiafewsamplematerial.ThroughtheeffortsofmeandPeter,myhearthopesthepartycanbuildupsmooth!